The orientation is any narrative is crucial. What details has the author provided to orient the reader about who, what & where?
Who?emily,jake,mrs williams,mrs brown,Dr fleming,Julian Kent,emma jones and mrs sheppard
What?stolen pie
Where?on the window cell
What is the problem or the conflict in the story? What do you think happens next?The pie got stolen and i think that mrs brown is disqualified from the pie contest
Who is the narrator in this story?mrs williams i think
Why isn’t this a crime story? How could you change it to make it one?i'm not sure
What else could have been stolen to set up the story?i don't know
Was the outcome obvious? Were there any clues along the way?well no
Has the story been adequately resolved? Did the detectives actually solve the crime?they didn't technically mrs browns husband told them it was mrs brown and it's been solved.
The missing girl
It happened exactly at 7:30pm Saturday when my daughter went missing Mrs cullen has been sobbing on the couch calling the cops soon the cops showed up.The cop said what's the problem Mrs cullen stood up with her arms crossed and walked back and forth while she was explaining. Mrs cullen Said "well my daughter she's missing *sniffles* i checked everywhere in the house and i couldn't find her *Sobs*" The cops asked if they got in a argument or if she mentioned running away or going to a party? Mrs cullen said "well there was this one time when she said she was going to a party and i said no and then we got into a argument" What was the argument about the cops asked.She said that there was going to be no adult supervision and then she stomped up stairs and when i went upstairs she was gone and her window was wide open" Do you know the address? said the cops she said ********* ok let's go they soon arrived to the house that was throwing a party the people said she didn't arrive they went to all her friends house and they haven't seen her since friday after school.Mrs cullen started crying saying this all my fault". The cops said take us to her favourite place but she wasn't there.Soon we saw a green smashed up car hearing a sound of a 15 year old girl saying help!!! they opened up the door and there was Mrs cullen's daughter Mrs cullen squeezed her daughter and started to cry and said "DON'T EVER DO THAT AGAIN YOU HEAR ME NEVER AGAIN". The girl said alright while nodding her head Mrs cullen said i'm just glad your back thank you officers have a nice day"
Written by:Aaliyah.G
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