Kia ora Aaliyah, my name is Elle and I’m from the Summer Learning Journey.
Thank you for writing such a cool haiku! I really like how you mentioned the beach and that it has the correct amount of syllables - that is a very challenging part of this style of poem!
Going for a swim at the beach is so much fun! When there is a big wave, do you like to try and jump over it, or dive under?
Maybe for next time, you could create a DLO with a summery picture, or a colourful background with a creative font so it stands out on your blog?
Ka pai and keep up the great blogging Aaliyah, I’m looking forward to seeing what you post next!
Kia ora Aaliyah, my name is Elle and I’m from the Summer Learning Journey.
ReplyDeleteThank you for writing such a cool haiku! I really like how you mentioned the beach and that it has the correct amount of syllables - that is a very challenging part of this style of poem!
Going for a swim at the beach is so much fun! When there is a big wave, do you like to try and jump over it, or dive under?
Maybe for next time, you could create a DLO with a summery picture, or a colourful background with a creative font so it stands out on your blog?
Ka pai and keep up the great blogging Aaliyah, I’m looking forward to seeing what you post next!
Ngā mihi,
Elle (SLJ)